This is not a good essay, said the lecturer. I find your arguments convince.

The ancient Romans used vessels equipped with sails and banks oars to transporting their armies

There is a hostel the bottom of the canyon where we can stay there.

As the marathon runner reached the half-way mark, he, being hot and was soaked with perspiration, stopped to rub himself down with towel.

The weather in the southern states ………….. very hot during the summer.

The number of student attending English courses at my university are increasing

Half of the money … to Mr. Lam. 

Find the mistakes and correct:

Sawfish are shark-like fish have “saws” of cartilage set with two rows of teeth on their snouts.

Drying food by mean of solar energy is a ancient process applied wherever food and climatic conditions make it possibly

California has more land under irrigation than any another state

Neither Daisy nor I … glad to do that. 

A lot of people stop smoking because they are afraid their health will affect and early death

Find mistakes and correct

The product you bought at lower price is more interior than the one that we sell at slightly higher price.

Some of the milk I bought last night ........... not fresh anymore. 

Acquisition certain specific skills can be facilitated from general awareness, education of novel situations

While they were away at the beach, they allowed their neighbors use barbeque grill.

If it is kept dry, a seed still sprout up to forty years after their formation.

This new nice flat looks perfect of the young couple.

We really enjoyed children’s imaginative and excited play last Saturday.

Until Hollywood invented him, Leonardo DiCaprio was practically unknown 

Carrie Chapman Call organized  League of Women Votes after successfully campaign for the constitutional amendment gave women the right to vote.